Comments for Sakhi's Laghukatha

Comment on Revenge by Vimmuuu

Vimmuuu — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 19:46:04 +0000

Ok, so the guys are bad in this story ???

and wait, she didnt know how to boil water ?? Sheesh !! she doesnt read my blog !

Nice story, but what happened to you ? you have given human names to all your characters this time

Comment on Revenge by Manoj

Manoj — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 16:54:20 +0000

Sakhi, this is just just my opinion – This story touched upon a sensitive issue, but I thought it could have been better. I thought the story went hayward right from when Shree thinks she should teach a lesson to her father. I understand that both the father and the daughter equally share the mistake, but then it was rather confusing on whose stand the story was taking. It looked unbiased not taking anyone’s stand for a while until the ending was ruined with the father vowing to ruin the boy’s life. I am sorry but I thought this story did not strike the chord though the issue handled was quite sensitive!

I hope no brickbats for me

Comment on Revenge by Titaxy

Titaxy — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 16:27:04 +0000

such a tragedy..but loved the way you’ve written it…these things happens many times than we actually think it does…

very well written Sakhi…loved it!

Comment on Revenge by Smita

Smita — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 13:54:34 +0000

Hmmm though liked it but found it too drastic & somehow can not digest the fact that the other mother missed all these things???

Anyways a story is a story and these things actually do happen As usual nicely narrated!!

Comment on Revenge by Deeps

Deeps — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 11:46:07 +0000

Adolescence is such a vulnerable phase. Every parent dreads it I think.

You’ve told a sad,yet a very touching story,Sakhi.

Comment on Revenge by sri

sri — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 10:55:24 +0000

such a sad story but I liked what sharad did with that, please let it be the ending please…

Comment on Revenge by Amrit

Amrit — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 09:31:14 +0000

This was a vague story. Sorry.

Comment on Revenge by Amrit

Amrit — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 09:29:42 +0000

This one was vague. Sorry.

Comment on Revenge by Sharad

Sharad — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 09:00:28 +0000

Nice one Sakhi….

She resolved to teach her father a lesson!… He was shell shocked not to find her but a note on her pillow. He collapsed on the bed reading his daughter’s life sentence to herself!

Tears started flowing and at that instance Shree came running out from the bathroom where she hiding…

She apologised for her behavious and told her father that she was angry at him..Mohit apologised too…. and they lived happily everafter

Comment on Dream Girl by Swaram

Swaram — Tue, 10 Nov 2009 08:51:17 +0000

Ha ha ha .. I trust u