Sakhi's Laghukatha


Posted on: February 16, 2008

It was so difficult to curtail her feelings! It showed on her face, with all the blush which made her already beautiful face more endearing. Rhea was meeting Animesh after six months. She was away for her postgraduation. Suddenly she saw him, waving and jumping among the people who had come to pick up their dear ones at airport. She almost ran to him and they hugged eachother as if there was no tomorrow. They had missed each other a lot. They used to mail and message everyday but technology, however advance, couldn’t provide warmth! They went home chattering about.

Today they had decided to go to “Lothal”, a site of ancient ruins. They packed the lunch and in their station wagon headed towards their destination. What a sight was it! They enjoyed it immensely. They walked around hand in hand as if they were married just yesterday. In fact they had been married now for 3 years. But suddenly Rhea’s foot slipped and she could feel her hand slipping out of Animesh’s hand and felt herself falling…and falling…and falling! And with a great thud she fell on the ground!

And with that thud, she suddenly woke up! she had been dreaming again…She started crying, again! It was as if she was drowned in tears since last 15 days, since Animesh left her suddenly. With a single stroke of destiny her life crashed, along with Animesh’s motorbike!


4 Responses to "Rhea!"

omg,sad ending again,slightly predictable……

but ur style of narration is impeccable !

have u done a professional course in story writin ?!


Hey thanks for the huge compliment.. i write just as a hobby!


one more sad ending…duh…. I am not gonna stop either….


yeah, life is full of sad and happy things… i prefer to write happy endings but can’t do that always! 🙂


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