Sakhi's Laghukatha

Poem Tag!

Posted on: July 10, 2008

I was tagged again… by RJย to write a love poem! A love poem! *rolling eyes*

This is a love poem but is for my best friend, we no longer work together but she still is my best friend and I miss her a lot!

I warn you guys, not to laugh at the end of it. I am not a poet, but was compulsarily dragged into writing this!๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜›

so hang on…. here I go;

My heart leaped,

When the phone rang,

I quipped,

Chirpily I chattered,

Lipstick and the new dress,

Gossip and distress,

All the things we talk about…

We are no longer together,

But my friend, when you call,

When we talk,

when we giggle,

When we fight,

I feel light.

Sweetie, you are the best…

My friend, The best!

29 Responses to "Poem Tag!"

Beautiful poem! Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful emotions, feelings and thoughts. One does not have to be a poet to write beautiful poems.

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really really nice๐Ÿ™‚ i double on what Raj says๐Ÿ˜€

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Hey thanks guys!๐Ÿ™‚ i thought you guys are going to make a lot of fun of me for this!

but thanks!๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜€

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Thats a sweet poem :)hope u show it to your fren she will be proud of you๐Ÿ™‚

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Innocent but funny, nice poem and bad try Sakhi๐Ÿ˜€ Keep writing stories๐Ÿ˜›

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hehe… nice job considering the situation !!!
I have a feeling you can do much better when someone is not breathing down your neck, armed with a tag๐Ÿ˜›

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Your friend couldn’t ask for more… if u please u can find a few poems in my blog too…๐Ÿ™‚
http://harshasrisri.wordpress.com/poems/

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“Chirpily I chattered,
Lipstick and the new dress,
Gossip and distress,
All the things we talk aboutโ€ฆ”

LOL, even the greatest of poets would have written this, so true!!! and innocent.

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@ S

I told u her, i think she will be very very happy!๐Ÿ™‚

@ Suda

i told RJ, i told him… but to no vail!๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜›

@ Daroga

*I have a feeling you can do much better when someone is not breathing down your neck, armed with a tag*

exactly!!!๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜€

@ harsh

just saw the link… u do a good job!๐Ÿ™‚

@ Vimal

*even the greatest of poets would have written this, so true!!!*

LOL,๐Ÿ™‚

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@ Abhi

Thanks๐Ÿ™‚

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Hi Sakhi. I loved the thought you expressed in this poem. I miss my friends too, many of whom are far away. Luckily through all of you in my blogging community I have found friends too. In fact like I suggested on Suda’s blog, I think we should have a bloggers meet with all of us in the community here. all of us are different ages and different backgrounds but it will be fun to meet. mostly i don’t go for the blogger meets as i don’t know anybody! what do you say?

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Hi Nita… I would definitly come for the bloggers meet.. If it is in India! would love to meet all our bloger friends whom we praise and give brickbats time and again! its a wonderful thought!๐Ÿ™‚

I think meghana is also game for it as she also suggested it ihher blog!

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Aww I second Daroga’s view!! RJ thinks as he is love n feelin poetic all should do the same๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜›
Errr cute 1st attempt!

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Thanks Reems but i get the meaning of “Errr” but u are sweet not to hit me with a brick!๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜›

Not only you i second Adarsh’s view too!๐Ÿ™‚

And RJ and his love life! What to say!๐Ÿ™‚

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:^)

I liked it.

very nice.

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๐Ÿ˜€ Thanks!

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cute…๐Ÿ™‚
verrrry cute !!!!

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Thanks sweetie pie!๐Ÿ™‚

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hahaha!! This is perhaps the cutest poem I’ve read as part of this tag!! Very nice!!๐Ÿ˜€
My heart leapt indeed!๐Ÿ˜€

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Very sweet, indeed. Anyone who makes fun of a poem like this doesnt deserve to live๐Ÿ˜€ ! Loved it !!

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Then what you’ll do kaam tammam of all laughter.

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@ Niks

Yoo hoooo, u liked it!๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜€

@ Priya
๐Ÿ™‚ cho chweet! Thanks a bunch, buddy!

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Very sweet poem…..
thanks rj for tagging.
it showed one more facet of sakhi’s writing.

“Anyone who makes fun of a poem like this doesnt deserve to live”
i agree, none of us can write so, innocent & at the same time so sweet & so touchy…..
yr friend should have proud on you (if c knows it)

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Hey thanks James! That was sooooo nice of you! LOL๐Ÿ™‚

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nice๐Ÿ™‚

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@Saks – I am prolly the last one commenting๐Ÿ˜ฆ Whew! I was busy and you know that!๐Ÿ™‚

It’s a nice, sweet, innocent poem about frienship! You did pretty well buddy! Btw, you ccan pass on my phone number to your sweetie๐Ÿ˜€

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@ RJ

No i dont know that you were busy and i dont want to hear about any excuse. U tagged me to this and you only saw it soooooo late…

And my sweetie is already married and has a sweet little girl…๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›

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cute poem:)

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