“Bestest” Friend
Posted October 27, 2009
on:- In: Fiction | Friendship | Marriage
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Kumud was excited about Achinta’s engagement. She and Achinta were friends ever since she could remember. She was a single child and so was Achinta. But they never missed having a sibling. They were like soul mates. “Bestest” friends, as Kumud likes to put it! Everyone was surprised when Kumud got married to Aunurag. It was assumed, even by their families, that Kumud and Achinta would marry. They rolled their eyes in unison on this assumption. Kumud easily moulded herself in her role as a wife. But Achinta always remained her best friend. Aunurag too accepted Achinta as a part of their family. So when Kumud called him about Achinta’s impending engagement Aunurag too smiled ear to ear. Kumud’s excitement was contagious.
As much as Kumud wanted to meet “the girl” before Achinta was officially fastened to her, she could not meet her till the day of engagement. When Kumud saw Achinta on the day of engagement clad in the traditional Bengali dress, standing tall and looking handsome than ever; her heart swell with love for her dearest friend. She almost ran to him and gave a bear hug. Both their families laughed at this childish display of affection. In all the merriment nobody noticed the shadow coming down on “the girl’s” face. Achinta introduced the two most important ladies of his life to each other. Kumud hugged Kakoli with equal enthusiasm and kept on chattering. In all her felicity, she did not notice that Kakoli was not sharing her exuberance.
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“Oye, what time are you coming for barbecue this Sunday?” enquired Kumud, as usual.
“Can’t, yaar. Kakoli is coming down for her shopping this weekend.”
“Aha… Dating-wating ‘n’ all, hun?” teased Kumud good-naturedly and both burst out laughing.
“Hey, why don’t you both come down once you are done shopping? I don’t think we will wind up party before 12. What say?”
“Let me see. I think we will be able to make it. Catch you on Sunday.”
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“Oye, sun yaar, I think we won’t be able to make it after all. Kakoli is having severe headache and she wants to turn in early since tomorrow early morning she has to go back to her place. Sorry buddy.”
“No problem… hopes she gets well soon. Hug her on my behalf”Kumud replied understandingly.
*****
This was two months back. In these two months Achinta’s visits to Kumud’s place reduced drastically. Their phone conversations, too, dipped. She complained about this to Aunurag, to which he just smiled and told her that it’s natural. She smiled a wistful smile. She hated Achinta’s absence, actual and virtual!
Kumud had expected to become friends with Kakoli too but Kakoli kept her at arm’s distance. There was this nagging feeling of unease when all four of them were together. The usual chatter and coziness were gone. Polite conversation took place of teasing. Achinta was the same when he was alone but the change was evident when the pair was together. He was not at home when he now came to their place.
As Achinta’s marriage date was neared a feeling of dread fell upon Kumud. She feared losing her best friend. She kept this feeling to herself but she knew in heart of her heart that it was inevitable. It was decided earlier that Kumud will be Achinta’s “best-woman” at his wedding. But that was before Kakoli came into picture. Now she was not so sure. Also Achinta had not mentioned it recently.
The duo came to invite Kumud and Aunurag for the wedding. The invitation was as formal as it can get. While handing over the card, Kumud’s and Achinta’s eyes held for a few seconds; Kumud’s eyes brimming with tears of losing her “bestest” friend, Achinta’s eyes brimming with silent apology.
83 Responses to "“Bestest” Friend"
Very Well written dear but yes Like Vishesh I also got confused with names hehehe…
I could relate to the story because been there done that!!! Lost a wonderful fren in the process!!!
Guess there are insecurities in each of us some can fight it out and others don’t!!
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i have not completely lost a friend to this situation as such but over a period of time the relationship HAS got dampened. I think I will be always be fond of those friends but it can never be the same again. 🙂 And, the best part is, I am fine with that too! 🙂 People come, people go… hurts a while and then I get up and about! 🙂
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** People come, people go… hurts a while and then I get up and about! 🙂 **
Wow !! .. That’s cool philosophy .. Everyone must learn that ..
But when someone goes, it hurts a lot yaaar ..
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Yes soham… it hurts like hell. I have cried in the nights, sometime not even understanding why the hell should i care so much to hurt myself! But over a period of time i have learnt a big thing about myself… though i care a lot, i cry, i miss friends but i can still cut off completely if i really wish to. Some solace!!! Sigh!!
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I just have three words for this story:
Amazing, Awesome, unbelievable ..
What a masterpiece of writing Sakhi .. For me, it’s ur best creation till date ..
It was full of emotion, sentiments and thrill .. Happy moments, gloomy moments, catchy moments, learning moments .. WOW !! .. I just loved it to the core ..
And you hit the last nail in the coffinn when U said : ** While handing over the card, Kumud’s and Achinta’s eyes held for a few seconds; Kumud’s eyes brimming with tears of losing her “bestest” friend, Achinta’s eyes brimming with silent apology. **
Amazing portrayal of feelings and emotions .. I hv become speechless with about-to-flow tears in my eyes ..
Thanks for the lovely story !! .. You always rock but this time you shook the world !!
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Sakhi Rocks………
Felt same like ‘Soham’
Really lost after reading story………. and suddenly wife called for dinner…… c found me like ‘zombie’!!!
and got ‘ANGRY’
thanks 2 sakhi.
feeling of insecurity rests with so many of us, hardly anybody accepts in reality.
and that is why, opposite gender friendship usually ends with silence……….. and sometime ‘silent apology’ too
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I hope your wife isn’t angry at me!! 😛 😛
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“and that is why, opposite gender friendship usually ends with silence……….. and sometime ’silent apology’ too” i hate this… don’t like it one bit even though i know thats the way life works!
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Wow.. a story from you after so long! 🙂
Nice one!
Relationships change very often, either due to circumstances around us or due to priorities. You can’t help but accept and understand it as a way of life.. It’s sad.
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lovely story, very good narration and capture of emotions, I just hope its just fictional and not real 😛
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funny thing is I couldnt see the comment box properly, half of it is aligned to left end , seems a problem with aligning of frames. 🙂
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Atleast Achinta’s eyes were brimming with silent apology. This itself is hard to happen in real life. Both friends would take it easy and move on in life. There will be very few who would actually feel atleast apologetic. It was a heart-warming tale. Would you want to clear the air between Kakoli and Kumud in future? Who wouldn’t like happy endings :D? By the way, is Kakoli a typical Bengali name?
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1 | swaps
October 27, 2009 at 12:47 pm
Tell me, did you write this at office?
🙂
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sakhi
October 27, 2009 at 1:33 pm
you tell me whether you like it or not? 😛
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