37 Responses to "Her last breath"
“It was a miracle that she could feel his presence and see him for last one time today!”
wow.. its a nice one dear.. 🙂 had a grat reading experience today. waiting for more..
where u getting these names?? mridula is one of favorite names as sakhi 😛
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oh, the good old twist !
but i seriously believe that if parents want to have a healthy relationship with their grown-up children, they need to let go of them.
Good one 🙂
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owesome!!!
i didn’t realise that when story ended.
typical of sakhi touch
welcome back…..
where were you?
keep it up with more and more!!!!
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>…<
This reverse Odepus complex is so tragic…sigh 😦
Thank God! I have seen people cope with it than break…but occasionally, we do see some fragile ones fail or succeed (in keeping their child in their 'grips', as it were). Either way its a dead-end.
Quite a bold story…not often spoken about.
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Nice one, yet again, Dharaben, with a twist @ “her son” 🙂
It reminded me of “Lohi Ni Sagaai” of Ishwar Petlikar. The story of Amratkaki and Mangu, quite different yet quite similar. I am hoping you remember it.
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i do remember “lohi ni sagai” as name of the novel but now don’t remember what the plot was. I MUST now bye a few gujju classics and read them again. Some of them are real gems 🙂
Thanks kanan for reminding me 🙂
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Welcome back-it is a treat to find a story back in my reader. This was a moving one-maybe most obsessive parents do not land up in asylums, but they do end up making life a living hell.
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i agree they dont end up in asylum but they make kids’ lives a living hell! 🙂
i am glad u liked the story 🙂
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Hi Sakhi, really liked your stories.
Do check out mine at my url http://literarystruggles.blogspot.com/
Would like your opinion.
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1 | Anu
July 20, 2010 at 10:53 am
🙂 You’re back with the same gusto!
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Sakhi
July 20, 2010 at 10:24 pm
Oye, u already know i have gone no where, but new job is keeping my so damned busy yaar! 🙂
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