Sakhi's Laghukatha

There is a monster under my bed!

Posted on: July 29, 2010

There’s a monster under my bed!

To my mother I said,

She scorned at me ,

I tried to look brave with all my might,

Because I had woken her up in the middle of night.

There’s the monster under my bed!

I screamed again,

But my mother was in no mood,

To listen to my plead again and again.

So reluctantly went I to my room,

My room which was now den of doom.

I went where the evil monster lay,

Ready to eat and slay,

It was my time to pray,

I bravely crept into my room.

But, to my surprise,

Where the evil monster was supposed to lay,

There was a big pile of hay,

I was so happy I began to dance in joy,

What a mysterious day O boy!

– Mahak Jain (10 yrs)

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Hey friends, this poem is written by my niece who is just 10 years old. Do let her know how did you like her poem. She has a good collection and wants to start her own blog. I agree completely. What you all say??

Love

Sakhi

26 Responses to "There is a monster under my bed!"

The girl is very talented. She should definitely start her blog !

very nice🙂

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thanks a lot for your encouragement. this is surely motivating to open my blog.

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Wow! She should🙂

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thank u so much

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Wow. This was beautiful-the thought, the musical rhyming and the twist! She should definitely keep up with writing.

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thank u for your appreciation ,if i get attention i will be more inspired

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starting her blog at 10 yrs of age???? WOW!

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cute😉 reminds me of what I wrote when I was around that age😛

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thank u, can i read your poem too, it will give me a lot of inspiration

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sure you can🙂 Ask Sakhi..she”ll give you the link😉

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I am so so proud of you my dear…I never realised you could write so good…. Keep up the good work…

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thanks mausi . u call mom if she does not make my blog

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Abhi to shuruat hai….. too good
keep it up Mahek🙂

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thank u. can i write stories also on it. i have 1 ready

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she should definitely start a blog! well written!!

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thanks i’ll soon write a story which will make u cry tears of laughter

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Lovely poem…o boy! it rhymes too!!

Keep it up Mahak… (even if it mean waking up ur mom at odd hours🙂 and pls do share.

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thank u .i’ll soon be at moms back to open my blog.

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So beautiful..🙂🙂 She has a way with the words…🙂

Hope she opens the blog soon🙂🙂

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Hey .. was the monster names “Boogie Man” ….😛😛😛

P.S. A new blogger in the town .. is it ??😉

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Awesome stuff from a 10 year old :))

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Nice🙂 I liked it.

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Wow! lovely. Its difficult to say that she is only 10 year old by her writing. She should surely start her own blog🙂

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When I was 10, I actually wrote one story in which the teacher gives a report card to student (me) and there i find that i failed in all subjec…. well never mind….😉 Well, I brought the comparison which accidentally cropped up in my mind to admire how well this poem has been written by someone… congrats🙂

Destination Infinity

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Nice poem, I really like it. Start a blog of your own Mehak,
Pronto!!!😀 we would love to see more of your writings. Good luck!!

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reminds me of my childhood days.. i used to run to my mom scared by evil dreams at midnight😉 lovely poem..

Tagged u🙂

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