Blessings… her point!
Posted July 2, 2009
on:- In: Life | Love | Relationship | romance
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Aakriti felt so agitated that Aakaash was going to be at the conference. It had been 15 years since she had seen him. 15 years since they had spoken. Since she had told him that her life was to be tied to another. It was her parents’ decision, steeped in tradition. She had hoped that Aakaash would protest – that he would fight for her. But her had just sat there with his mouth hanging open. She had waited for him to call. Hoped. And then the hope faded away. Perhaps her mother had been right – perhaps Aakaash had jut seen her as some minor amusement to pass the time – but not to marry.
But she had accepted her fate as graciously as she could. Until she discovered that her husband did not want her at all. His parents had arranged the marriage and even waived any dowry requirements, to keep a cover on their respectabilility and the fact that their son preferred men. He was gay and saw this arranged marriage as yet another rejection by his parents. He resented Aakriti, not because he had a problem with her specifically, but because of what she represented in his life. Her parents had been so thrilled that they did not have to worry about the dowry. It was something that had weighed on them for so many years, since the birth of their daughter.
So Aakriti threw herself into her work. It was her only solace. Her only outlet and escape from the realities of her personal life. And at first it worked. Her colleagues treated her with the respect due a woman, ostensibly successful in her professional and personal life. But as the years passed, and she continued to live the lie to protect her parents from the truth, to keep the facade of respectibility, it became hareder to cope with the questions of when she was going to have a baby – something she wanted so much – of her in-laws’ taunts about her barren womb, even though they knew the truth about their son. Aakriti hardened herself. If she was gruff with people at the outset, then they would not ask questions that she didn’t want to face, let alone answer.
So now, all these years later, she dressed carefully as she prepared to meet Aakaash, her one true love again. And yet as she applied her lipstick so carefully, she saw the harsh lines on her face. In place of laugh lines, there were frown lines. In place of smooth skin across high cheek bones, there was blotchy, loose skin that gathered in folds across her jowls and neck. Her face showed the ravages of so many years of trying not to care. It could not be turned back now.
And then she saw Aakaash at the conference. She felt herself light up as she observed him. She hoped to make at least the connection of friendship, after all these years. And she felt her internal light dim as his eyes moved towards her and then passed over her in complete lack of recognition. When his eyes returned to her, she saw him trying to place her and then the shock as he recognised that it was her, Aakriti. She was about to go up to him when he hurriedly excused himself and fled from the room. And she realised that he didn’t really want to see her at all.
The realisation was like a rock on her heart. And yet, she composed herself once again and found strength in her work as she had so often before. When she had her work, she didn’t need anybody and they could not hurt her in any way. She ignored Aakaash for the rest of the conference because to talk to him would be too painful. Not just for the love she had lost 15 years ago, but also for his rejection now. And she knew that her mother had been right all those years ago – Aakaash had never thought of Aakriti seriously – she had just been his play thing for a little while. And now she was finally free of all the romantic illusion that she had created for herself – and she could throw herself completely into her work.
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This work is by a dear reader. She wrote this as a comment but I thought it deserved to be a full post. Thanks sioneve! 🙂
53 Responses to "Blessings… her point!"
Aah… Not the Dostana angle… Even if she is free from Aakaash now, she’ll have to go back to her gay husband which means more suffering for the poor Aakriti. Killing him off or a divorce was a better idea.
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Can i contribute to the third part!? I’ll keep it short and sweet.
On his flight back, free from Aakriti’s ghosts, while flying through blue Aakash(skies), Aakaash meets the women of his dreams. An air hostess with a lovely smile. He proposes to her the moment he sees her and she gleefully accepts it. They get married the moment flight lands on the ground 🙂
Coming to Aakriti, she comes home, looks at the news paper and sees that the gay rights have been revised. She asks her husband to marry the man of his dreams and give her a divorce. He accepts her offer immediately and lets her go. Now that she’s free to explore she proposes to her richest patient and both live happily ever after
😀
I’m sorry if I made a mockery of the lovely story but then I couldn’t hold back myself too 🙂
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Wow, didnt see this coming !!! talk about different perspectives, huh? Nice one. and yes personally, I have an elderly friend who got divorced last year because her husband was a gay. It seems she never knew about that in thier 3 years of marriage. Silly world, huh?
Out of context : My new post which you skipped isnt ‘technical’ at all. Do you think Im crazy to write something serious?? LOL ! Infact Im editing the beginning of the post about the same right away.
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Check my ‘edited to add’ in the beginning. Phew! Im relieved !!! Sorry for using this space to let you know !
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@ Varun :
LOL, you can give another twist just before exploring the rich patient!! Aakriti comes running to meet Aakash to tell him that she is divorced and to check if he can accept her. and guess what, she arrives at his home on his engagement day. (aa aa aa a aa aaaa –kuch kuch hota hai theme music) 😀 😀
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This one truly deserves a full post .. No second doubt about it .. great work sakhi and sioneve !!
@Varun and @Vimmmmuu :
LOL !! That was hillarious .. Nice way to end the story ..
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wow!!!
But this such a sad angle!!!
But it teaches us, every story has another side which needs to be told 🙂
Every question has an answer which needs to be asked & not assumed!!!
Every action has a reason and if it really matters to us we will go find the logic behind it…and clearly Akash never loved her enuff!!!
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Hey friends, i havent specifically answered the comments since this was not my creation…
Thanks again sioneve for sharing this with us all! 🙂
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I think this part has been written with a very heavy bias against the males of the species. I’ve read the last part that you wrote & I simply couldn’t figure out what this part’s author was thinking when writing this. Aakriti expected Aakaash to fight for her when she herself was not interested in fighting for herself?! I think thats being naive or rather playing dumb to then think that Aakaash just thought of Aakriti as a plaything! When she’d already made her mind to resign to her parents’ wishes, what was he supposed to do? Fight for a person not interested in him any longer?
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I loved both parts-really creative to view both sides. And they are so real
But could there be a new ending-one when they see each other’s view?
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This story just cmpleted ur story beautifully. Both together reminded of a similar wrk by a fellow Blogger Dhiman..
Here r his two posts
And yeah i luvd reading these two posts of urs..
sumhow feel better after writing a nasty review on ur latest post 🙂
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1 | daroga
July 2, 2009 at 8:16 am
It sure deserves a full post !
very well written 🙂
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